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Review #4723998
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Microscopic Stories  [18+]
Entries for the Micro Fiction Challenge 2022 and Drabble Activity 2024.
by Beholden
         Review for entry/chapter: "Little Green Men" 
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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I must appreciate the thoughts behind the micro-story. It is a constructive idea. There is no doubt about it.
But, the execution is a bit weak. It becomes too much descriptive. That hampers readability, too.
Suggestion:- If you add some conversation, it will be more interesting. I assure you that will be within a hundred words, too. Otherwise, it can be considered an interesting report but not a story.
I hope that your creativity will entertain us also in future.

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