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A Needed Friend  [E]
A mom now understood
by Magoo
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Hallo!
I visited your portfolio because your WDC Anniversary is coming up. The title and brief description intrigued me, so I clicked on this item.

What a lovely poem about giving love to overcome grief! The emotions and images come across beautifully with the words chosen and the verse structure.

Suggestions:
1. Maybe some WritingML like font, size, center, italics.
2. When I read the title and brief description, I expected something about how a kid understood something (like disciplining) that a Mom had done which didn't seem good at the time. The poem turned out to be something else. You might consider changing the brief description ... ?

Thanks for sharing!
Write On!
- Sonali


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