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 Un Named Piece  [E]
This poem is about a reconstuction project in my area back in 2003.
by Showering Dutchessbarbie.
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Hallo!
I visited your portfolio because your account anniversary is coming up. I wondered what an untitled piece would be like, so I clicked.

I love the poem.

You've used short, simple words and yet pack quite a punch. The second line sets one thinking, and all the rest unfolds as a metaphor for so many things in life.

A special note about the genres you've chosen, they enhance the interpretations of the poem.

While it was the Un Named that got me curious, maybe you'd consider giving this piece a title? That's my only suggestion, the rest works as is!

Thanks for sharing!
Write On!
Sonali

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