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 Powers of the Universe   [E]
Poetry about a girl
by Roop
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is truly a brilliant free-verse poetry. This is a poem about that girl with whom the narrator is very much obsessed. It is a love poem that is full of romance. Overall, it is a special creation.
I especially like...
”However, similar to the earth pivoting around the sun,
My heart longs for yours,"

These two lines tell us how much the teller-obsessed with that girl. These lines are very striking.
We also identify that she is the powerhouse of him, his universe.
It is a very bright beginning. Keep writing.



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