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 Hail Queen Marissa  [E]
the new Queen
by Richard Allen
Review by the last cicada
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Richard Allen ,

Thank you for the opportunity to review the first installment within your series the queen has returned. ▼ *MushroomBr* *MushroomP*

*Star* Rating is for the following. Aside from a few lines with unusual wording, the words flow well. The theme of the poem follows the theme about the Queen as expressed by her loyal subjects.

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Thank you for sharing this installment. I look forward to reading the next installment.

~ Amy
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