Although your suitcase shows you as currently online, I visited your portfolio after reading this to make sure you're still here. Yes! Whew!

The form is obviously there to mimic a rope. That works well.

This poem is very dark. In a way, I can understand some of the feelings and sentiments. The repetition of "Hope, Nope" one time followed up by "Rope" and the next time followed up by "None" makes almost too good of a point to end it all. Of course, that is only true inside of this poem, but not in real life.

I hope you only wrote this as an exercise in mulling dark thoughts and that you are actually doing well.



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