It is truly a fantastic writing effort. There is no doubt about it. But it a just a scene of a novel, it is not fiction.
Summary of this...
She is in a dream. In the dream, she is with her lover. They are dancing together. The environment is indeed spectacular. So she is enjoying these exclusively. Some supernatural incidents happen. Fantasy also takes place. Overall, that place becomes a true dreamland. Entertainment is all over the area. Suddenly, she opens her eyes and finds herself again in her room.
I especially like...
The building of the scene is truly beautiful. It is very impressive. Steadily, the writer introduces every step one by one. But those do not hamper the pace. So it comes to brilliant artistry.
Suggestion
I can not find any error, both technically or grammatically. Therefore, no suggestion from my side. I just tell you repeat this performance again and again.
Closing comments
Those sweet applications are not so easy. But those have been made with perfection.
Keep writing.
A bright future is waiting for you. So utilize this God-gifted talent properly.



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