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 MEMORIES  [E]
A poem for my best friend
by Julie D
Review of MEMORIES  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is fantastic poetry which is a tribute to a true friend from a real friend. Their souls are attached too tightly. But destiny smiled. Heart disease separated them physically when they departed due to health conditions. Then other one realizes that their bond is so tight. The teller can not forget him for a moment! It is an immortal bonding.
That tells the relationship between two humans. Unfortunately, it is an excellent performance.
That can be thought from a different angle, too. The same connection is expected between God and a human. He lives in our hearts as an eternal soul. He shows us the correct way where we should go. But only a few can realize these. They are devotees. But the relationship is going on all over the life.
Suggestion:-
The writing effort is good. But, you have to concentrate on genres. It tells the story of a relationship. Therefore, the first genre must be 'Relationship'.
This is the personal experience of the narrator. So, the second genre should be 'Personal'. Being a tribute, you can choose 'Tribute' as the third. genre or you may select 'Emotional' as a third genre, too.
Anyhow, it is a great beginning. I hope that you will continue this performance in future, too.

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