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Had Time Stood Still?   [ASR]
An odd occurrence on the bus.
by Don Two
Review by Monty
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Not buying any gadgets. Sure would not like ending up with the world freezing on me left there, the only thing able to move. Where would I get food to eat? I suppose I could steal from a store if the door was not froze shut but even if I could manage to exist, no one to talk to I would soon get tired of talking to myself. Glad to look back and see this was a fantasy. The rhythm, rhyme and imagery are good in this story and I enjoyed reading it. No errors noted.
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