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Review #4733257
Viewing a review of:
Jots and Tittles and other Random Things  [13+]
Just things that I think about now and then.
by AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -
         Review for entry/chapter: "Poet's Café - a "Cinqku"" 
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Greetings, ajar627.

I'm Jace, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering, specifically "Week 27 - Apples"  for the "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~"  group. *Smile*

*Puzzle4* Form. The form is Cinqku, which has a form of five lines with 2 syllables, 3 syllables, 4 syllables, 6 syllables and 2 syllables with a twist in the final one or two lines.

*Note1* Overall Impression. Ah, the promise of Spring. Your poem signifies rebirth--the ending of winter. The poem follows the correct form with one exception, in my opinion--the twist.

I feel that the final two lines support the rest of the poem in a routine manner and does not represent a twist.

*Exclaim* Technical or Editorial Considerations. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your poem.

         *Bullet* I have nothing to add in this section.   

*Star* Rating.  4.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinions.


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JACE

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