Hi, SP is Muddling through , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Fruit to Bread" , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The second verse is my favorite because the questions made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny poem because it made me laugh.