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 Sleepless  [E]
Snapshot of a memory from childhood
by Kalixta
Review of Sleepless  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is another tiny but artistic creation by the poet. The narrator tells us a disgusting memory from childhood.
The teller was in a deep sleep. Suddenly, a fizzy crackle wakes him from that reluctant sleep where he is in a Hershey bar and Coke. Interestingly, the narrator shares with us.
I hope that another great creation will come soon.

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