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 Errands   [E]
A poem about errands
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hallo!
We had a conversation on the newsfeed, so I thought I'd keep up my review streak by sending you a review! *Rolling*

I'd entered this contest too and was interested to see your take on the prompt words.

I guess anyone can relate to having more chores dumped on them when they thought they had the existing ones planned out!

1. The title: It works as is, but I wonder if you'd like to expand it to something that indicates what the poem is going to be about - like "Irksome Errands" (just off the top of my head.)
2. Brief description - you could add more here, too.

The poem itself is very relatable. Maybe it could be a bit longer, too, with some more emotions or actions that depict emotions added!

Write On!
- Sonali

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