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Review #4735334
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 Thank You Anonymous  [E]
Only way I could think of to say how much your gift ment to me.
by ~LadyBee~
Review by StephBee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem was a heartfelt way to say "thank you" to Anonymous here on WDC.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the tone of the poem. It was easy to read and it was heartwarming.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem with 4 line stanzas and a ABAB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "He comes through like a flasher, just giving me a peek."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I love the unique graphic signature added at the end. It's a great way to leave an impression here on WDC. A very upbeat poem!

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