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 The Job of Your Dreams  [E]
An open ended story for the environment
by Weirdone-Back in the games
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Weirdone-Back in the games , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Job of Your Dreams, because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024 forum page.

First Impression: An incredible thing happening at the waste disposal factory hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the character builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it emphasized the fact that it is up to human beings to take care of the ocean.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of its message about the environment.

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