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 This is My Life.  [E]
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Review of This is My Life.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama


Hallo! This one showed up on 'Read and Review'.

What an irony - you speak of it as being 'my life' and then move on to living it for others! *Smile*

I like the message you give, starting with an individual (who seems to be a creator of art) and going on to humanity as a collection of people and how they can lead more enriched lives.

The last couplet came as a surprise, though. It seemed as if it was someone in the prime of life writing the lyrics.

Suggestion: Just a small suggestion for WritingML - font, size, line space, center.

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