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 Yesterday was like No Other Day  [13+]
Writing Prompt: Start with this phrase: Yesterday was like no other day.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama


What a great response to the prompt.

The words and verse structure echo the mood and readers can relate and empathise.

I appreciate that the character makes no excuses or asks for no leeway - just straight out takes responsibility for what happened. I also like the acknowledgement that in betraying another, the character has betrayed self.

My favourite part is the last verse - where you bring nature into the emotions and look for some hope there.

I have no suggestions for improvement.

Write On!
- Sonali

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