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Review #4740369
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 Starlight’s Journey  [E]
Through the depths of space
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating .

I'm Jace, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Starlight’s Journey"  for the "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~"  group. *Smile*

*Puzzle4* Form. You offered up a Cameo poem, a poem with seven lines of 2, 5, 8, 3, 8, 7, 2 syllables for each line. I've never heard of this form before. Well done with the format.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I think your subject was inspired and used this format well. I wonder why certain words were in bold. Were you following a contest prompt?

*Exclaim* Technical or Editorial Considerations. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your poem.

         *Bullet* I had a problem with your use of the word "bawls". Being uncertain of its meaning, I looked up the definition. The only thing that came up was to 'cry out loudly'. This seemed at odds with the quiet of space.  

*Star* Rating.  4.5. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinions.


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JACE

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