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 Family Luck 3  [13+]
The third part of the story
by Odessa Molinari
Review of Family Luck 3  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello, Odessa Molinari Random Review time.

I enjoyed this not have read the other two parts, but I think it was interesting looking for the lost brother, and the dialogue that happens. I'm not sure of character descriptions happens in the other chapters, but I think it would be a nice addition to this one, especially for people like me that haven't read the others. I can get a fell of the dialogue but no imagery.

Description could be clarified a little more as explaining its the third part but some enlightenment would be a bonus. Again, I enjoyed and don't mean to step on any toes, all is just my opinion. Thank you very much and enjoy your day!

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