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 Idalin's Patio  [E]
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by IdaLin
Review of Idalin's Patio  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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GAMES OF THRONES ESSAY REVIEW

This is a review for "Idalin's Patio"  from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" 

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

*Reading* THE MESSAGE FORM

The forum invites WDC Community members to stop on by, introduce themselves, say hi and share fellowship and friendship.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the heartwarming tone the introduction set. I enjoyed the greeting: "Other beverages are available for those over 21, but tea is the best." I agree! Tea is the best!

*Star* INTRODCUTION

The introduction uses a graphic to help set the mood and tone of the forum along with a quote from Jimmy Buffet. If anything, there is a link to an invalid item in the introduction that I might suggest cleaning up.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML in the introduction to switch up the colors. It catches the reader's eyes more.

*Star* EMOTIONAL CONNECTION

The author connects with their visitors using a variety of techniques, such as heartwarming pictures and whimsical sayings. If anything the last entry was 17 years ago, so I'd love to see more recent interaction. I would be more than willing to stop back and rate the forum higher if there is more recent again and the invalid item is attended to.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title is reflective of the forum and very inviting. See above for suggestions.


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