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 A poem about boredom and music  [E]
A poem written when I was bored, & while I was listening to music
by KindaJackofAllTrades
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My name is Angelica, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: A poem about boredom and music

First Impression: The speaker starts out by being bored, and there is only one thing they can think of to do when they are bored. That is to turn on the volume and to listen to music. Then the speaker describes the music. How wonderful it is to the imagination. Like a train station of places only you could go to. Then it wraps up with what music can do, forgetting reality and "makes us float". Especially with instrumental music, I agree with the conclusion.

Boredom is a common thing when we just sit around and have nothing to do. This is what I imagine when the speaker said they are bored. But, there was one thing they could think of. Music. I think their description of music is accurate and to the point. I would never think of a train station having a million ways to go to but it is possible. Just using your imagination the places to go to can all be interesting and fun to go to. Never boring. This reviewer would love to buy many short trip tickets to those places. Including far away places. Make it a short ride please.

What needs your attention: No spelling or grammar errors found.

What part I liked best: The image of the train station and all the places you could go to while listening to music. My imagination runs all over the place here.

Overall impression: I enjoyed your poem about boredom and music and think it is quite accurate. Music can take you anywhere you want to go to. There is no limits stopping you when you listen to music. It is also relaxing as well. If feeling nervous or worried or anxious, it is often a go to medium to soothe your nerves. I say you nailed it on what it's like to listen to music. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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What does the Fox say?????

Listen Carefully

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