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 Chester's Imaginary Friend Lester  [E]
"The Humorous Poetry Contest" - November 2023
by Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hallo!
I visited your portfolio because it's your WDC Anniversary. The title intrigued me since I had an imaginary friend too, as a child.

It's very relatable, the lack of someone to talk to leading to an imaginary friend and the reactions of the people around. You've depicted that well.

Um -- you've classified this as 'comedy' but I responded to it with empathy, not humour!

Suggestions:
1. I didn't understand the second line - about 'demand'. Who was in demand, Chester or Lester?
2. I'm not familiar with the poetry form. Maybe a note about it, at the conclusion of the poem ... ?

Thanks for sharing this relatable piece!
Happy WDC Anniversary!
- Sonali

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