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 My Christmas Prayer  [E]
Even in death he lives in me and his friends.
by Vicki Lynne
Review by StephBee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "My Christmas Prayer"  from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" 

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*Reading* THE POEM

The poem is a heartfelt look at how the author's friend had touched their life.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem is poignant and heartfelt. It leaves the reader on an upbeat note, but it goes through emotional highs and lows as it dips and ebbs through life. In this way, it makes an emotional connection with the reader that resonates.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. The poem reads more like a prose as there are full sentences. The poem presents itself as a Christmas tree which is appealing as well as being done in green.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I suggest using WDC ML to increase the font so as to make it easier on the eyes for the WDC reader.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "To make it through the "tough times" with a strong heart and with wisdom." I think all of us strive for a strong heart when times are tough.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The poem is heartwarming and bittersweet to read. I have no suggestions for improvement. I thought the title was perfect for the presentation.

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