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A Fisherman's Tale  [E]
Its giant body slinked just below the surface
by intuey GoT Survivor!
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a truly wonderful poem based on the uncertain lives of fishermen. Suppose we read an adventure story which is full of suspense and drama.
Those fishermen watched that milky shadow that was furious and could send them to Hell. The face of fishermen's
turned ashen, white, and pallid,
The teller's chin trembled, as he was frozen to the spot.
The massive tail rose and hammered down on the water with a thunderous roar, freezing sprays rained down.
A seagull's cry broke their coma. They understood that they saved. I decided to return. They would tell the story. Will they believe it or not? This is a tough question. Only time know the answer to it.
I especially like how classically the poet used the 'Drama' genre in this poetry. The poet created an example of how to use suspense in the poetry.
Undoubtedly, fishermen struggled too hard to earn. Sometimes they return in void hand. Don't you find any similarity in our lives? We set a target to fulfil.
We get success so often. But, after a few moments, failure embraces us. Is not comparable to the life of fishermen?
It is an excellent attempt.
Write on!




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