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| (4.0)| GAMES OF THRONES MESSAGE BOARD/ATTENDENCE REVIEW This is a review for "ATTENDANCE SHEET" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. THE MESSAGE BOARD  The Message Board serves as a Guestbook for the author.  WHAT I LIKEDWhat I loved about the guestbook is how the author has chosen a "Back to School" theme and is calling it "Attendance." Other items in the author's port are also school themed, so this is a nice compliment to the over all portfolio.  ENGAGINGThe person popping in is invited to sign the attendance log. After all, one wants credit for being in the right place at the right time. The tone of the forum is light-hearted and endearing, encouraging the visitor to leave a missive. VARIETYA lot of people have stopped by and left a note, which was nice to see, if anything, it was a while since the last person prior to me had popped in - 27 days, I think. In that regard, I might suggest follow up to encourage engagement. Follow up could be anything. A question a day to bring people back or a prompt like flash fiction. It could be a school based prompt to stay on theme. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTSI liked the graphic in the introduction. It set the tone of what to expect from the forum. It's always a good thing to take attendance.  Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen 
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