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The Not So Calm Before the Storm  [13+]
An odd group of birdwatchers take shelter and trouble brews.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Webwitch. I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Not So Calm Before The Storm

First Impression: Some birdwatchers seek refuge in a cabin and a cat tries to attack them and one person gets hit by a broom. I had to laugh. This had my attention. The cat is the sweet the woman says. I thought I had to see how this played out. I was in it now.

What needs your attention: I must have missed this but this doesn't say that these people are bird watchers. Maybe that is why the cat had a problem with them. The rest of the story tied everything in together nicely.

What part I like best: The kitty and it's antics. The descriptions of the characters. One was skinny and I tried to picture her. A Man wearing a feodora hat. The lady and her broom. Was she a witch and the cat her familiar? Good descriptions of the area. Sounds like a good place to visit except for the unfriendly cat.

Overall Impression: This is entertaining. Some good characters. Their names match their descriptions. Some humor. This has something for everyone. The cat with the red glowing eyes. It makes you wonder what happens next? It ends. Oh no.

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