Name of Poem: Ghost Rider
Name of Author: Ledgerdemain

Hello Ledger,

I am Kristina, and I am here to give you a "Game of Thrones"  review and rate it. I came across your poem, Ghost Rider, while browsing through your portfolio. I enjoyed reading your poem very much, and I hope you find this feedback useful.

Message/Theme: The message shows the author's feeling towards the moment of death. He describes his/her feelings on the back of a speeding horse being ridden by an invisible individual.

Narrative/Style: The narrative is a poem that shows how swift and cold death can be.
The Style is emotional and personal.

Form/Flow: The form is a four-stanza, four-line (better known as a quatrain) Free Verse poem.
The Flow Follows the author's thoughts.

Tone: The tone expresses the author's feelings concerning death as dark, cold, and frightening.

Mood: The mood represents the author's transference of the feelings of non-resistance, fear, and darkness to the reader.

Imagery/Pace: The imagery used was very effective in the descriptions and showing of feelings. The Reader will be able to feel what the author is displaying.

The pace is smooth, yet forwarding.

Suggestions: I cannot offer any suggestions for improvement. I think this poem is well written and delivers its intended message.
Suggestions:

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