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 | Beach Fantasy  [13+] A quick test run to get the creativity flowing. (THIS IS A CHARACTER POV-NOT MY THOUGHTS!)  |
| (4.0)  This Review was done on behalf of House Targaryen as part of "Game of Thrones" ! Morning 重子若林 The small paragraph put into quite a pessimist point of view. Relatable to some I imagine, that have sensory issues. I was at first a little taken back but the honesty of this, I know a lot of people think such but would never admit it. Reminds me of people digging holes cover their pets fecus, and a kid steps in it, and it all the parent of the kid fault. I can understand the sand in the food, the noise of too many people, and all that comes with being a public place. I used to beach often, but never now. It was my kids favorite spot till they knew pools had no jellyfish. Great test run, I could see the busy beach during the day, and the elegance of the sounds of waves and the glow of the star filled night. A bit hateful but well written, the description is great it prepares the reader and lets them know it's fiction. Thank you for sharing and Welcome to WDC> StaiNed-House Targaryen disclaimer The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Good day! 
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