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 Ketsana  [E]
a poem about a storm
by peter alistair
Review of Ketsana  
In affiliation with The Royal Court  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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This poem paints a vivid picture of a moment of reflection amidst the mundanity of everyday life, juxtaposing the warmth of a cup of coffee with the looming presence of impending rain. The imagery of stirring cream into freshly-brewed coffee and observing its transformation to the color of mud evokes a sense of tactile intimacy and sensory experience.

The repetition of the phrase to the color of mud creates a sense of monotony and stagnation, mirroring the speaker's feelings of familiarity and routine amidst uncertain times. The contrast between the warmth of the coffee and the absence of light to reflect suggests a loss of vitality and hope, as if the world has become muted and subdued.

The description of things familiar sticking out at the edges hints at a sense of dissonance or discomfort within the speaker's surroundings, adding depth to the poem's exploration of perception and perspective. The closing lines, with the speaker sipping their coffee before it gets cold and observing the impending rain outside, convey a sense of resignation and acceptance of the inevitable passage of time and change.

Overall, you’ve crafted a lovely little poem that is a poignant meditation on the fragility of comfort and routine in the face of uncertainty and change. Through its evocative imagery and introspective tone, it invites readers to contemplate the transient nature of human experience and the resilience found in simple moments of solace and reflection. Thank you for sharing this with us! Write on!

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