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Night of the Fireflies  [13+]
Andrea captures something more than she bargained for
by iKïyå§ama
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello iKïyå§ama

This is very interesting and honestly not where I thought I was going. so much detail you can share, I could imagine the fireflies turn to fairies, hear their smallest voice trapped in the jar. Like I said interesting. I found myself picturing Tinkerbell, or the rat fairies from Red String and Blood Tea.

I do not have any suggestion to improve or change this, it is well edited, and had me captive to see it till the end. I enjoyed the sweet story, hoped it might get a little darker, but smiled at the names, the mood this created and the ending like a win win.

Thank you for sharing, and I hope my review was helpful.

StaiNed-House Targaryen






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