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Which One Will Win?  [E]
Based on a Cherokee Legend
by Chrys O'Shea
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "Which One Will Win?"  from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" 

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*Reading* THE POEM

The poem shares an old Cherokee legend that asks us to look into ourselves.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Having spent time as a Boy Scout leader, I used to include an Indian story called, "Everyone's Canoe," into the Scout's Own and this story poem reminded me of teaching points. The old stories and legends are very relatable to our everyday life.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any punctuation/spelling mistakes. The poem is easy to read and understand.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "tearing at one's feelings, behaviors, and attitudes," and while it isn't necessarily a physical description, it's an emotional one that every reader can understand. There are have been times we've all been a little torn over a situation that has confused us.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The poem challenges the reader to examine themselves in a very thought provoking and critical thinking way. Do you want to be the ugly wolf or the good wolf? It is your choice. This poem will resonate with readers long after it's read.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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