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 A poem for Chance  [E]
A poem written for my feline friend Chance.
by Kit of House Lannister
Review of A poem for Chance  
Review by Maryann
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim*. Hi Kit! I thought I’d take a chance and read this poem! Kidding! I saw so many poems about your dear furry friend, that it made me want to read one of them. You mentioned that you are not a poet, but I do disagree. I enjoyed this poem and I can say that you did a wonderful job with it.

I love poems that rhyme, so I was pleasantly surprised to see how beautifully this one rhymed. It added to the fun and sweetness of your tribute poem to your pet.

You expressed in your poem that you are so proud of Chance. I can feel that emotion in your writing.

Your readers follow the cycle of his growing through your well thought out stanzas. I smiled when I read about how he was a coy kitten, just learning to loose his fear and trust the owner.
What a good life you gave him, to help him through a bad start of sickness and get him to be the mighty cat that he is today. It was a lovely name to give him at the young stage, during the period of uncertainty.

I have three large dogs. As a person who is so used to having the dogs, I could imagine from your writing what it’s like being around a cat….Being around Chance. Your descriptions of his sweet, gentle purr and coiled tail painted the picture vividly. I liked how you described his meow, too. I can tell that there is a strong bond between the owner and pet.

Kit, my favorite line was the closing line, about how he keeps your feet warm! So sweet! I thought that was a perfect way to end the poem.
Our pets do become part of the family. It was thoughtful of you to write a poem for yours. I’m sure if he could talk, he would be just as proud of you. Thanks for sharing your cat poem. *Cat*


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