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 Recurring Nightmare  [ASR]
A nightmare I've had for 25 years or so.
by Legerdemain
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Legerdemain ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones [13+]. *Smile*

Overall Impression:

Wow, this is a frightening dream indeed. I felt tense reading it - I can only imagine how it would feel to experience it. And for 25 years? Yeah, not nice.

I have had recurring dreams, too, over the years. They mainly seem to feature gigantic birds. Goodness knows what that is all about. I had one about gigantic spiders (bit of a theme there with the size), but I eventually managed to gain control over it and when I got to the spider I could turn it into something cute and adorable. That particular nightmare left me alone after that.

I am not very clued up about the meaning of dreams. It is said that it's a way for our brains to process the day's events, but many of my dreams are very far removed from my day-to-day reality! The inability to stop or steer the car may have something to do with your feeling you lack control over your life. Is that possible? It's not uncommon for us to get swept up in events and there isn't always something we can do about it.

Anyway, your nightmare made for a good read. As you can see, it also offered food for thought. I do hope you stop dreaming this, though!*Heartv*

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions. This is a dream, so it goes the way that it goes, and I could spot no spelling or grammar issues. Well done!

My Rating:

This is a tense little read. I wondered how it would end up.

I had no suggestions. Therefore, I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Write on!

Kit

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