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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation

"Game of Thrones"  Hello Fellow Writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.Title: Take That, Ya Punx!First Impression: Right from the first sentence Phil the Groundhog uses his voice, his words, his attitude to explain Groundhog Day and his reluctant role in that. He is definitely not a wall flower. He speaks his mind. He hatches a hilarious plot to foil/hinder the creation of Phil statues for the town. He becomes a behind the scenes manipulator extraordinaire. What needs your attention: Sometimes, the ideas are flying 'round us furiously and we forget to include words. I believe you forgot the word 'with' when writing "get away nearly anything." "It was a Hatch Chili Breakfast burritos." Is it meant to refer to one or more? What part I liked best: I appreciate the humour in this tale. It is amusing to thing a groundhog would be able to speak and plot as this Phil does. I like his partner's jab at his weight saying he's "too much around." I like the nonchalant way he admits he works one whole day per year. It is amusing that he manipulates the artists he loathes to create funny statues. He makes fun of himself. The ending is hilarious. Phil is immortalized as Phallic Phil.Overall Impression: Punxatawney Phil is not to be trifled with. Thanks for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure! What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.(1462 characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.