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I enjoyed your story very much. The story certainly didn't go in the direction I was expecting it to, but that made the story more interesting and more fun. The characters were interesting and unique. Even though you don't go into an enormous amount of detail about the characters, the details that are given are just enough to create the images of the characters well. The descriptions were straight-forward and well-used, creating a distinct picture of the events for the reader without bogging down the story. This allows readers to visualize what's going on with ease and without getting lost or confused/

I particularly enjoyed the ending of the story. Not only was it good to see Joe get a bit of a second chance with the possibility for some happiness, but it was also pleasant to see that Mr.GR sent Joe a message explaining things and telling him that his friend was alright. It was a happier ending then I was expecting when I began reading.

I did notice a few simple errors. Once Joe is pulled onto the boat, thanks Charon and the Grim Reaper, and then asks where he is there is a large space between the first quotation mark and the "T" in "Thanks" that shouldn't be there. Also, a couple paragraphs down, after Mr. GR points out the party, he explains that Joe and Antonio are being taken to Limbo for processing. There should be a quotation mark next to the word "We".

Overall, this is a fun, enjoyable story with good characters, a well-thought-out plot, and a happier then anticipated ending.