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 Welcome Back Kotter  [13+]
A fan fiction story which includes a topic for WDC's Game of Thrones competition
by Maryann
Review by Lyn's a sly fox
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Welcome Back, Kotter

First Impression: Oh my goodness, I used to watch that show back in 1975 maybe 76. Gabe Kaplan played Kotter. The show was hilarious. I think the actor would get a kick out of your piece about naming a drink after your family. Mine would be Too Touchy, feely in the Sand or maybe Manhattan Runaway.
I wish I could say this is unusual student behavior but it's not. It takes a lot energy for teachers to keep children focused.

What needs your attention: No spag issues {spelling, punctuation and grammar) It's all Joey's fault for coming up for the abbreviation.

What part I liked best: Kotter trying to get the kids involved by giving them examples for the head of the family. I would go with Groper Man for my father. He thought he could grope any woman because he was a man. Yeah, I knwo he's a sleezeball. Even sleezeball works for a drink name. Kotter's comment about Sleepy Zombies was funny.

Overall impression: I hadn't thought about this shoow in years. Thank you for the stroll down memory lane. They've done a lot of old programs returns, I'm going to look and see if this was one of them.

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