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 A Song for No One  [13+]
Only the birds are singing this morning.
by elizjohn
Review of A Song for No One  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings from the House of Mormont!
By participating in a Writing.com activity called "Game of Thrones" , I am in no way endorsing the GoT franchise or identifying as a fan thereof. I’m here to help my team win *Smile*

Oh, I do like good poetry. This is a lyrical piece that paints what at first appears to be a pretty spring scene, which then becomes imbued with sadness and loneliness when we see the narrator by themselves, waiting for the return of their loved one. You describe the setting and the emotions with sincerity and passion, conveying the feelings of longing in the midst of the beauty.

You should give this poem the formatting it deserves; I always recommend size 4 Verdana font, and you may want to experiment with centering the text and choosing a different color font to increase reader engagement and make it look more artistic, rather than just a “pile of words” off to one side of the page. A line count at the bottom is also a good idea because it’s nearly always required to enter contests around here, such as "First and Second Chance Poetry Contest"  or "Shadows and Light Poetry Contest" .

As one who dabbles casually and cautiously in poetry writing, I don’t have anything to offer in the way of suggestions for meter, form, structure or word choices. Your writing is your own, and I have a laidback attitude about how anyone puts a good poem together. Poetry can be a highly subjective art form, a vessel for us to pour real or imagined emotions into and share what we’ve created with readers in any way we want.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *HeartG*

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