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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm

"Game of Thrones"  Hello fellow writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.Title : UnmaskedFirst Impression: I just had to read this piece because, well, I am currently a fox, a House Florent fox. Surprise, surprise as ol' Gomer would say. This was not about an animal. Or what is it a different type/ species of fox/animal? Now I know 'zorro' means fox. This is an aha moment. This particular Zorro was caught red-handed with his, no, her pants down, er, in his clutches. What needs your attention: Nothing unless I am too busy, preoccupied with laughing to notice. Wait a minute. I could suggest a comma before the 'but' in this sentence. "He stumbled out a confused explanation, but gave up." A minor, finicky thing.What I liked best: May I choose all of this ? I was anticipating a read about a marauding fox, but instead I am subjected to a woman's clothes thief skulking about in the darkness. You set the scene with a man on horseback committing a silent vigil beneath a balcony belonging to a slumbering female. He has time to contemplate his own cleverness and skill with a pun and the soothing of his steed. You tease with the description of his savouring the woman's clothing which eludes to something more such as a rendezvous. The ending is a hilarious reveal. He is nothing , but a panty snatcher. Oh, and apparently a cross-dresser, too. How fortuitous for him that his victim is the same size.Overall Impression: This turned out to be a flirty, fun bit of writing. Within a few words you introduce a mysterious cross-dresser thief and you utilize the given prompt words. Kudos. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure. What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.91819 characters) DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.