It's a great beginning. Our life is a battlefield. From our birth, it begins and will be ended at the time of death. We have to fight for everything. There is no scope to take some rest. So, many people try to find relief from the addiction. That may come in various forms. It is a wrong step but tired humans often cherish them. They have to pay heavily later. Fortunately, some people don't repeat this mistake, they become winners. The poet wants to show us the truths of life.
Suggestions
Concentrate on selecting your genres. Through genres, we can understand the subject or theme of the writing. It is impossible to understand anything from
'None'genres. So be careful about selecting genres.
Your style of writing is brilliant.
Carry on this performance.



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