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 | Your Choices Define Everything  [E] Follow Morgan on her road to discovery.  |
| (4.0)   Greetings, DR Rawson ! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Read & Review.  I also noticed you are new to Writing.com. Welcome! If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. What I Liked I loved this! Short and sweet. I especially loved the mom's answer at the end.  A library has so much to offer. Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderJust a few... her Mother  her mother Unless you are addressing Mother, mother shouldn't begin with a capital M. said to her Mom said to her mom Unless you are addressing Mom, mother shouldn't begin with a capital M. "Where Mom, where." "Where, Mom, where?" It's a question.  In your last paragraph, you might consider breaking it up into three paragraphs, due to the dialogue exchange. Final ThoughtsI worked in an elementary library for eight years before taking a job in a village library as a library director. I love books, especially children's books. What you've written here is so true! Children (and anyone else) can travel in a library. I love libraries!  Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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