"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Green Willow

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Angel in Wonderland

First Impression: I've read a few of your entries and was impressed with your openness. I could feel your hesitancy and then saw you persevere on. Kudos. I think we surprise ourselves when we do accomplish something that we have doubts about. I hope you enter again now that you've tried it once. If you glance at Princess Megan Rose 22 Years book one and book two, you'll see her growth in writing confidence as well.

What needs your attention: I didn't see anything I would change in your book setup or the entries themselves. Nicely done!

What part I liked best: I found the my love with h amusing and nicely done. I was impressed with how the h's felt like they fit perfectly.
I also agree with you about Drowning of Tears, that prompt would be difficult for me as well. My grief is still so raw and overwhelming I'm not sure what or where it would take me.( My thirteen year old grandson was killed. Nothing in life prepares you for that.)

Overall impression: The entries were thought provoking and well written. I found the author's writing enjoyable.

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What does the Fox say????? Look at you, from Wonderland to Game of Thrones. Baptism by Fire!


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