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 Petals of love!  [18+]
Unusually cold over here making me shiver in the morning mist and yearn for a warm hug!!
by Kalai
Review of Petals of love!  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

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This is a review for "Petals of love!"  from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" 

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*Reading* THE POEM

Heat and Cold combine along with the visual of a flower opening to hit on the different notes of yearning and love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Really nice word play with the poem! With the heat and cold we have polar opposites finding attraction under the silver moon with the use of the flower providing the romantic elements.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "...Ebbing waves of love makes me warm with your thoughts! Chilly wind penetrates my skin and makes me yearn within!" -- We have hot and cold coming together, hitting on notes of longing and yearning for the partner.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title fits the poem well. The opening line engages the reader, hinting that the little petals of the flower will grow and bloom much like the emotion of love does. A poem that it's visuals hint at a deeper, emotionally romantic meaning, such as finding first love or true love.

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Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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