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Review #4744979
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by ruwth
         Review for entry/chapter: "~ Hmmm... ~" 
Review by Annette
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello ruwth

I am here with a review for your entry in "I Write in 2024" .

First impression:

I really like how you presented this piece. I like how I'm getting to know you more like this by coming in right after you for a second week.

What works:

The whole thing kind of just works. There aren't any spelling mistakes and because it's an experience rather than fiction there aren't any plot or other discrepancies to mention.

What needs work:

As this piece relates to your own experience, it would be nice to have more details to the different steps that you outlined in bold.

Step One: Envision Your Dreams *Right* What is your dream. It mentions finishing I Write in 2024, but surely you have other dreams for your life that are creative or otherwise in need of formulating.
Step Two: Internalize Your Vision *Right* I would have liked a little more of an idea what it means to internalize a vision. What does it look like and how do you go about internalizing a wish?
Step Three: Take Daily Steps *Right* technically self-explanatory, but it would be nice to know what are the daily steps that you are taking.
Step Four: Push Through Obstacles *Right* Which kind of obstacles do you expect and how do you plan on pushing through?
Step Five: Relish Your Victories *Right* What is the prize or reward that you want to offer yourself? What is your stick and what is your carrot?

Final thoughts:

Completing "I Write in 2024"  is a great goal to have! I think that when you submit that final entry of the year, you will feel such victory that it will propel you to tackle other writing and creativity goals in 2025 and beyond.



Annette
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