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Poetically Prompted  [E]
Fourth go around on Promptly Poetry Challenge
by Spring in my Sox
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We meet again for another I Write in 2024 review.

As you already know from last week, I take poetry pretty casually and I'm not going to fuss about meter or structure.

Having gotten that out of the way, I can say this is a nifty poem. I love how you've depicted the strength and mysterious beauty of the tiger without any of the brutality that could have been mentioned. It's purely artistic, as most poetry should be. In fact, when I was younger I would probably have memorized it and added it to my poetry collection.

I love tigers - I was born in the Year of the Tiger - and an elegant poem like this is just the kind of thing I enjoy. I can't offer any suggestions for improvement except perhaps for the final line, which kind of breaks the flow: "secret dreams it'll keep" might sound better as "secret dreams it keeps," disregarding the mismatched plural at the rhyme. Other than that it's perfect.

I'm viewing it on my phone this evening, so I can't tell how you've formatted it. I'll give the usual recommendation for size 4 Verdana font.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Heartg*


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