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My Wish  [E]
Written for Whispers of the Soul
by Purple Celebrates
Review of My Wish  
Review by Jayne
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, Purple Celebrates!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
"My Wish" is a tender and heartfelt poem that evokes the enduring presence of love, even in absence. It beautifully captures the essence of an unbreakable emotional bond.

*Checkb*Form, Rhythm, Cadence, and Style:
This poem utilizes a free verse structure that flows smoothly, mirroring a comforting lullaby's soft, soothing tones. The lack of a rigid rhyme scheme allows the emotions to take center stage, with natural pauses that emphasize the sincerity and depth of the speaker’s feelings.

*Checkb*Content:
The poem captures the speaker's deep desire to be a perpetual source of support and comfort. The imagery of holding someone close and being a constant, unseen guardian is powerful. It speaks to the theme of love transcending physical presence, suggesting that physical separations do not hinder authentic emotional connections.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
The poem is well put together, with a careful selection of words and structure. The grammar and punctuation appear correct and are used to guide the reader through the message without distraction.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
This is a touching piece that will resonate with anyone who has loved deeply. The poem's gentle flow and emotional depth make it a comforting read, perfect for moments of reflection.
Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Jayne *Smile*


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