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Martell 2024  [18+]
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by Maryann
         Review for entry/chapter: "Mirror Reflections" 
Review of Martell 2024  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Storyline: Stephanie is worried about reflections in the mirror she thinks should be there, but aren't. In her quest to figure out why this is happening, she goes to see Dr. Mars, of Unique Cases. Everything is normal as she signs paperwork and waits for the doctor to see her. She makes notes of pretty things, for instance, the nurse's scrubs, and the receptionist. When the doctor arrives, she tells him what has happened to her.

Spelling/Grammar Issues: *Thumbsupl*

Description/emotion: Good descriptions of Stephanie's surroundings. I liked that after she tells the doctor that she's not crazy, it made her feel a bit uneasy that she blurted it out that way, though the doctor did not seem put off by it. His suggestion of seeing an eye doctor throws Stephanie for a loop, which it should. She's young. She didn't realize this could be possible at her age, but she moved forward and headed off to see Doctor Webster.

Overall Impression: For some reason, I half expected Stephanie to look in the review mirror and see that everyone is a Vampire. It was probably the reference in the story eluding to Stephanie's thought process. It's nice when things work out easily, though wearing glasses for the first time can be an adustment.




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