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 | Cat And Mouse  [18+] A poem about my abuse.  |
| (5.0)| Hi there, I'm Beacon and I found your Poem at random. I'm with the "The WDC Angel Army" and "Game of Thrones" . I enjoyed reading it and I hope you find this feedback useful.  I am the watcher on the walls. I am the shield that guards the realms of men. I pledge my life and honor to the Night's Watch, for this night and all the nights to come My First impression:When I read your poem, this made me think of my own experience, when I getting into my teenage years. This must have been painful to write, which I can understand. A situation like this is never easy to forget because I never forgot the abuse I endured from my first ex-boyfriend. You have endured so much, and just by reading your poem, the man didn't care, it seems. If a family member did that to me, I would have told someone because I know my mom wouldn't believe me because my mom and I were never close. Suggestion: The only thing the poem needs is be centered and put commas plus periods. Final thoughts: You know, no one should have to go through that and it's not right because it does damage and you're scared to trust anyone except the ones who are close to you, which I could understand. It took me years to learn how to cope my own emotions because of what I went through when I was 14 years of age. It was one of the scariest situation, I've ever been in my life. I had a hard time trusting people as well. To this day, I don't like anyone touching my face and standing behind me. The reason I brought up my own life because you're not alone and I understand the pain. That's how I felt, the guy I was with at that time, was manipulated, possossive and abuser, it never left me. I know what to watch out for now because they are warning signs. I hope you will recover and have some close friends, you can talk to, so you can vent out, if you need too. Thank you so much for sharing Beacon  Disclaimer: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.
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