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Carriage ride: Portsmouth to Chichester  [E]
Personal Conflict: Each traveller fears that their shoe is offensive!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings from the House of Mormont!
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Oh my, what an amusing yet distressing situation! It reads as if there were at least six people crowded into the carriage - I was a little surprised to find there were only four. But I haven't read much Dickens lately; I suppose four is the limit, of course.

How ever did you think of writing this? Was it inspired by one of the endless assortment of prompts Gaby has provided at GoT? Never mind, I just looked at the creation date and saw it's from November of last year. That's the kind of thing I always forget to look at. Perhaps you should list the prompt inspiration at the bottom for reference.

Wonderfully descriptive of a motley and old-fashioned combination of people, each with a unique smell that soon becomes something else... Oh dear. Not flatulence, thankfully. Doggy doo can always be scraped off on the doorstep.

I see no areas for improvement in this quick and funny vignette. It reminds us of the great variety of humanity and how easily we can collide.

Thanks for sharing, take care, and enjoy yourself at GoT *Heartg*


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