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 [to verbs] M3  [13+]
all action now flaccid, flabby, limp.
by Kåre Enga in Montana
Review of [to verbs] M3  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Having just woken up from a nap, I am grinning from ear to ear about how I relate to this. You've captured the feeling in a unique way.

My only suggestion -- more!!
I would've loved to read a longer poem, with maybe some specific examples ...?

Thanks for the chuckle.

Write On!
- Sonali

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