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Hello, Kitty!  [13+]
A surprise visit
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings from the House of Mormont!
By participating in a Writing.com activity called "Game of Thrones" , I am in no way endorsing the GoT franchise or identifying as a fan thereof. I’m here to help my team win *Smile*

An amusing and rollicking tale of an adopted cat and her thirteen kittens - eek!

For the first few sentences I thought maybe it was a true biographical story, which is silly, but I had just come from your wedding forum and your extended bio and still had my mind stuck in nonfiction.

I don't understand how people could make this grammatical error: "Opening the door, she entered the house with grace..." The cat did not open the door for herself! I hope you don't misplace the object of the sentence these days, Gaby. It's quite annoying when I see people doing that.

It's funny, my Mom adopted a feral cat who turned out to be expecting kittens many years ago. She tells me how she noticed strange bumps on the cat's belly and brought her to the vet... Those were nipples!

The heroine's attempt at solving her wild kitten overload is certain to only make things far worse - how ever did she come up with that idea? A Husky - oh boy *Rolling* I can imagine the adorable videos going viral, but peace and quiet in that household will be a thing of the past.

A thoroughly enjoyable story, and a fun adventure into the long-ago depths of your port. I really liked conducting this raid, but I won't be going beyond ten reviews because I just don't see the point, due to the Daily Review Rewards program. It feels like overkill - wait'll you see Gervic's efforts in your port!

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Heartg*

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